Digital worlds – English for the web: Feature article - Lee (60-69)
Commentary
Although this script has a strong personal voice, demonstrating an understanding of the concept of cyber bullying, it shows a basic understanding of the appropriate style and text conventions of a feature article. The response demonstrates basic planning and organisation and displays variable control of the language structures and conventions of a feature article. This response demonstrates the characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing within the 60–69 mark range.
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